Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Swimming by holly

Room 5 and Room 6 went to Kilbirnie pool yesterday. We went under the tent before we had our swimming lesson. my group got free time in the pool first when the others were finished we went to have our swimming lessan when we fnished we got dressed. When we were gettng dressed there was a fire I quickly put my t-shirt on. some other children weren't all dressed. They got tin foil to help keep them warm. My buddy was Ruby.  We played stuck in the mud. Finally we went back to school.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 5, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Hi Holly

    I really liked the way you descrved the fire alarm.

    From Rebecca

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  2. AnonymousApril 6, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    Hi Holly

    I really like your story.

    FROM:REBECCA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

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  3. AnonymousApril 7, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    HI Holly like your story I think u should add more detail


    From G.Y ROOM6

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  4. WilliamMay 6, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    YO

    I really like your story it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    From WILLIAM

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